HELP ON THE NATIONAL PEACE ESSAY CONTEST:
Can Outsiders Help to Bring Peace in Civil Conflicts?

Suggested Order of Things to Do

1. Your Thesis Question

 Can outsiders actively help to bring peace in civil wars, or is this kind of intervention likely to fail until the conflict has burned itself out?


2. Research

  Choose two violent civil conflicts in which outsiders were involved in attempts to bring peace. Your examples should be conflicts that took place outside of the United States, and at least one conflict should have taken place since 1980.

Suggestions of those over with (maybe): Bosnia, Viet Nam, Rwanda, East Timor (since 1980), Czechoslavakia, Korea and Holy Roman Roman Empire

Suggestions of those in which no outsiders intervened (much): Tibet, Iran (overthrew the Shah), Holy Roman Empire

Suggestions of those in process: Israel, Kashmir

Ways of intervention: sanctions, military force, economic assistance, military training, air bombing, negotiation facilitation, UN involvement...

3. Develop a tentative thesis statement

4. Justify your thesis statement with evidence from and analysis of your research

  Use your two examples to analyze what third parties can do

a) to bring peace and which third parties should be involved

or

b) to examine the problems with third party intervention and analyze why it does not work.

5. Conclusion

 Conclude your essay by making policy recommendations based on your argument.

a) If you conclude that third party intervention can help bring about peace, how should we strengthen these efforts in the future?

b) If you think that interventions by outsiders cannot bring about peace, what other efforts can the international community make to prevent or to resolve violent civil conflict?

6. Submit a Thinking Page (outline or in phrases giving thrust of content)
Use the following outline as your structure

 THESIS (introduction)

SUPPORTING EVIDENCE FOR THESIS (body)
a) one violent civil skirmish since 1980 not in US
1) explanation of conflict
2) interventions attempted
3) result
4) analyzation of interventions
b) one violent civil skirmish during any time of history
1) explanation of conflict
2) interventions attempted
3) result
4) analyzation of interventions
c) Use your two examples to analyze what third parties can do
a) to bring peace and which third parties should be involved
or
b) to examine the problems with third party intervention and analyze why it does not work.

CONCLUSION
restate
summarize
generalize


7. Make sure your essay does not exceed 1500 words.

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