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| 1. Thesis Paragraph *thesis statement *summary of paper |
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| 2. Body At least 3 paragraphs with reasons supporting your thesis |
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| 3. Conclusion *re-iteration of thesis *summary of all reasons *generalization: why this would be important for everyone |
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Ideas for a thesis:
1. This was a great production because....
2. This production wasn't very good because...
3. This production could be improved ...
4. Having the Mr. Skyview Showcase is a good idea because ...
5. The wrong guy won because...
6. The right guy won because...
7. The guy who should have won was ______________ because ...
Hints:
1. Keep "I" out of thesis papers
2. A well-developed paragraph has at least 3 well-developed sentences
3. The paper must use only substantiating information from the Tuesday night
production. There is no credit for a report based on your opinion or other
factors that can't be substantiated specifically to what occured at the
Tuesday Showcase.
Contestants: Nick Edwards, Isaiah Wycoff, Brandon Hoang, Mike Yang and Brandon Daves