HELP WITH WRITING
POEMS

Pick your required poems from this list and get inspiration and ideas for your free choice set.
Special thanks to contributing student authors and Mrs. Mindy Bloom, SHS English Teacher
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 1. BIOPOEM
Option per Ms. Romento: omit the words "Lover of" etc... and just list or write in a phrase or sentence that you want
 Requirement Your Draft
 Line 1. your full name (you may do it on anyone, a tv character, friend, character in a novel, etc...)  
 Line 2. 4 character traits  
 Line 3. Lover of (list 3 things character loves)  
 Line 4. Who feels (list 3 things)  
 Line 5. Who needs (list 3)  
Line 6. Who fears (list 3)  
 Line 7. Who gives (list 3)  
Line 8. Who would like   
 Line 9. Full name  

Writing a bio-poem is an effective way to describe the deeper levels of a character's personality. It is also a good means of self-discovery.

Example:
Amy Ann Mainelli
Hyper, friendly, honest, brunette
Lover of food, beaches and guys
Who feels tired all the time, confused about life
and hopeful about everything
Who needs to sleep in, a good breakfast and 10 dollars
Who fears spiders, embarrassment and exclusion
Who gives very little attention to details, parents and speed limits
Who would like a license, a boyfriend and a fun weekend
Amy Ann Mainelli

 More Examples

 Kris Anderson

 


2. SENSE POEM: combining a visual image in words and thought

1. Select a colorful picture from a magazine, the internet or your photo collection. It should be one you feel you can describe well.

2. Study each detail of the picture. Think of words to describe these details, words that appeal to the senses. Write you words in the boxes below. Use only those categories which are appropriate for your picture.

3. Use a dictionary and a thesaurus (if you have one available) and include them in your chart.

4. Place a * after the first words in each box which you feel are the very best.

5. Write a one-sentence description of your picture from each set of words you starred. Keep revising until you are satisfied.

6. Mount your picture on paper with your poem.

7. You may write additional sense poems on your own subjects/ideas or pictures and pick the best for your creative writing book.

 Words for color

 

 

 

Words for shape

 

 

 

Words for taste

 

 

 

 Words for sound

 

 

 

 Words for smell

 

 

 

 Words for touch

 

 

 

 Words for size

 

 

 

 

Now finish the following one-sentence descriptions of your picture
using a selection of the words you starred.
 I see
 I hear
 I feel
 I smell
 I taste
 I know

 Anderson Example

 

 

 3. MEMORY POEM #1

Plunge into a memory. Go back as far as you can and rescue your earliest "I remembers..."

4 lines or more

I remember a school carnival where I pitched pennies and won a silver whistle.
I remember a green frog, shopped to pieces in Daddy's lawn mower.
I remember a pink and frilly dress I ripped to shreds, sliding down a stone wall.
And I remember the thunder in my mother's eyes when she saw it.


Another Example

 4. MEMORY POEM #2

In this memory poem use at least 4 lines starting with "Childhood is..." with a last line that sums it up.

Example:

Childhood is walking along the street on the fifth of July
looking for unspent firecrackers.

Childhood is waking up early to read Tom Sawyer in the first light, and taking a flashlight to bed to read Little Women under the covers.

Childhood is selling lemonade, and falling off a swing and getting lost in the woods called Bloody Hallow.

Childhood is playing Monopoly on rainy afternoons and hearing grown-ups say no a thousand times and never, never stepping on a crack because it'll break your mother's back.

Childhood is jumping rope and playing Red Rover at dusk and beating up the boy down the block because his three-wheel bike is bigger than yours and he won't give you a turn.

Childhood is saying, "Star light, star bright, first star I see tonight: I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I make tonight,"
and believing it.

 5. DEFINITION POEM
Each line of this poem takes off from a different "sense" and
the first line is almost like a metaphor, while the remaining four use similes.

Hope

I am hope
as old as earth,
sun and moon.
Yet I feel young,
like a crisp, warm breeze
sweeping down rainy dew fields.

I am the blue of skies,
oceans and rivers,
flowing gentle as rain.
I am hope.
I will not perish,
born of the first man.
by Vince Freeman

Loneliness

 Loneliness is gray.
It sounds like a cold wind in winter.
It smells like an attic in autumn.
It tastes like bitter aspirin.
Loneliness feels like a tear gently running down your face.

Examples of variations on the definition poem

 Bauman

 Anderson

 6. QUESTAD POEM
This poem combines a series of poetic devices. Click on each for definition and/or example.

 Title = topic of poem:
 Line 1 = personification:
 Line 2 = hyperbole:
 Line 3 = Alliteration:
 Line 4 = Onomatopoeia:
 Line 5 = Metaphor:
 Line 6 = Simile:
Line 7 = Imagery:

Examples

 Lightning
   

 CARS
by Eric Harker

They seem to sing when you rev up the engine
The sound is sweeter than honey,
purring proudly like a pack of panthers

VROOM!

It is a shiny dream in the eyes of a child,
speeding like the space shuttle,
gleaming with silvery metallic paint along a black road of fragrant tar.

 

 

 7. CINQUAIN POEM

 Pattern A

 Line 1 2 syllables Windows
Line 2 4 syllables glow out at me.
Line 3 6 syllables Like eyes, sometimes winking,
Line 4 8 syllables they welcome me; bright, shiny panes
Line 5 2 syllables of glass.

Pattern B
 Line 1 subject of your poem Steam train
Line 2 what it looks like Cow catcher, huge wheels,
Line 3 what it sounds like Blowing its shrill whistle
Line 4 how it acts Puffing clouds of black smoke
Line 5 what you feel about it Iron horse of bygone days.

Pattern C
Example by Shandy Ziegler
 Line 1 Subject of poem Hero
 Line 2 2 adjectives or descriptive words Cunning, reluctant
 Line 3 3 ing words Fighting, saving, believing
 Line 4 verb phrase Going the distance
 Line 5 Another word for subject of poem Father


Example

Pattern D
 Line 1 noun (title) Flying
Line 2 2 descriptive words High, far
Line 3 3 action words Gliding, turning, soaring
Line 4 4 words to express feelings in the cloudless sky,
Line 5 1 word synonym for title Joy

Example


 8. Diamente
This poem gets its name from its shape, a diamond.

Line 1: subject of poem. Any subject will do, but it will be necessary later to write the opposite of this subject, so pick a subject for which you can think of an opposite.
Line 2: two words that describe your subject
Line 3: 3 actions that you associate with your subject, using verbs ending in ing
Line 4: 4 things you associate with your subject
Line 5: 3 ing verbs that indicate there is a change taking place in your subject (don't use the same ones you used for in 3)
Line 6: 2 words that describe the subject now that it has changed
Line 7: 1 word that is the opposite of your original subject in line 1

Examples

Summer
golden, fragrant
building, blooming, bursting,
warmth, flowers, youth, colors,
fading, chilling, shrinking
pale, dead
winter

House
vacant, forgotten
sagging, echoing, waiting,
weeds, dust, neglect, emptiness,
buying, repairing, filling,
cozy, loved
Home

 9. "I used to be..."POEM

Before you begin to follow the steps outlined below, think of two objects that could symbolize yourself. One to stand for the way you used to be when you were younger, and one to represent the way you think you are now. Once you've decided on the two symbols you will use, write your poem by following the steps below.
 Line Directions  Example Your Draft
 Line 1 Write either I used to be or I was.  I used to be .
 Line 2 Write the name of the object you chose to stand for yourself when you were younger.  a caterpillar  
 Line 3 Describe in a line or two something about the object you just named making it like you.  inching along.  
 Line 4 Write down either "but now I am" or simply "now I am."  But now I am  
 Line 5 Write down the name of the object you chose to stand for yourself now.  a butterfly  
 Line 6 In a line or two, describe something about this object that makes it seem like you.  floating free.  

I used to be
a caterpillar,
inching along.
But now I am
a butterfly,
floating free
.

Once I was
an empty notebook.
Waiting...
for a pen,
to come by.
Now I am
a heap of crumpled notes
waiting for
the janitor

 An example from
Kris Anderson

 

10. POEM WITH PERSONIFICATION

Represent an emotion (joy, grief, fury, loneliness, boredom, hysteria, peace, jealousy, shyness) as a person. Select an emotion and imagine what kind of person it would be like if it were human. What would it look like and sound like?

 Part A: Fill in the description of the kind of person you imagined.

1. Emotion you are representing as a person:
2. The person's body type:
3. The way the person moves:
4. The person's coloring (hair, eyes, etc.)
5. Way the person speaks:
6. Way the person makes you feel:

Template, Example and Practice:
Directions  Example  Your Draft
 I saw  I saw anger clearly.  
 S/he was  He was muscular and strong.  
S/he turned and  He turned and lunged at me, his fist thrust forward.  
I saw his/her  I saw his red skin and black eyes  
And heard him/her And heard him bellow with rage.   
 And I felt  And I felt afraid.  

Examples

 Sadness
by Kris Anderson

I saw Sadness enter the room
She was slender and tall
She turned and frowned at me, with tears
glimmering in her eyes
I saw her pale face, as her blue eyes dug
into my heart
And I felt sad as well.
For the world in her blue eyes
scream sadness within my heart


Sadness. Cameron, Julia Margaret. “Sadness.” Masters of Photography. 8 Mar. 2001
<http://www.masters-of-photography.com/C/cameron/Cameron_sadness_full.html>

 Love
by Kris Anderson


I saw love float into the room
She was glowing as if glitter was flying around her body
She turned and smiled at me, just beyond the door
I looked deep into her eyes and saw overall purity
And heard her sweet, calm, voice sink into my ear and into my heart
I felt so out of control, not sure what to do next


Alicia. Silverstone, Alicia. “Alicia Silverstone: Gallery.” My Alicia Page. 8 Mar. 2001 <http://www.geocities.com/Baja/7061/AS.html>

Worksheet and Examples

 

 

 11. SIMILE POEM #1

A simile is a comparison using like or as. "Like a rose" or "swift as a deer." By following the steps below, you can write a poem that compares two objects.

If you think of this poem as if each simile is a sentence, that will help you in the construction of the lines so that there is parallel construction. The first line is a comma or phrase line. The second line completes the simile and should end in a period, making a complete and grammatically correct sentence.

Directions  Example  Your Draft
TITLE: Select a pair of closely related objects to compare, like boys and girls, a dog and a puppy, an ocean and a lake, a weed and a flower or the moon and a star. Write the two objects you are going to compare. Women and Men  
 Line 1: Write down what season of the year object 1 is most like A woman is like spring,  
 Line 2: For the second line of your poem, describe something about Object 1 that makes it seem like that season With a budding potential ready to sensationalize.  
 Line 3: Write down what different season of the year Object 2 is like A man is like winter,  
 Line 4: Describe some quality of Object 2 that makes it seem like that season Ready to withstand the rigors of physical endurance.  
 Line 5: Write down what animal (or item in nature) Object 1 is like A woman is like an exotic purple-black orchid,  
 Line 6: Indicate why Object 1 is like this Seeming delicate and fancy but actually strong and ambitious.  
 Line 7: Write down what different animal (or item in nature) Object 2 is like A man is like an oak tree,  
 Line 8: Describe some quality of Object 2 that makes it seem like that strong, powerful and able to provide support.  


Examples, Student Example, Simile Worksheet or Worksheet


 12. SIMILE POEM #2
Write an 8 line poem using 7 similes

Example:

She runs like a deer, swift and sure,

She plays like a kitten with thread,

She yelps like a puppy when she bruises her knee,

She coos like a dove when she is happy.

She dives like a swan, deep and true,

She eats like a bird (all day).

She cries like a banshee and sings like a lark,

But she's really a Ms. in May.

We need a new example!!


 13. "WHY?" POEM

This poem tells why people behave the way they do.
 Line Directions  Example  Your Draft
 Line 1 Write who your poem is about (you can use either an actual name or a phrase like "the base runner" to identify the person.  My sister  
 Line 2 Describe some specific action done by this person Combs and combs her long, brown hair  
 Line 3 Write down where the person does this action In front of the mirror in our bedroom  
 Line 4 Write down when this person does the action Every night.  
Line 5 Write down why this person does this action (or why you think s/he does it).  She wants to show me how beautiful she is.  


Student Example

 14. HAIKU
 Examples and Worksheet

"Haiku is a very short poetic form, consisting of three lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllables each, and must have a special word
which evokes the season. It is probably the shortest poetic form in the world, and its development is native to Japan, with
no influence from either the West or China. The poet must be concise because of the brevity, while concentrating deep
spiritual understanding into the poem. The haiku poet usually takes up the changes of nature which have impressed him in
order to express the intangible world of the spirit.

"Although it is difficult, haiku is not written only by professionals. Anyone can easily learn to use the form." The Shiki Haiku Internet Salon

 

The Imagination Trick

imag/: images, usually two of them, make for good Haiku

in/: The Haiku could relate to somethng in your personal experience.
What did you see today that you would like to share?

/nation: country or nature is referred to in haiku

Essentials in Traditional Haiku

1.nature
2. verb
3. contrast
4. season implied

 Requirement
Your try
Title and credit
Elk Hunt
by Bev Questad
 (5 syllables) an image
 Majestic antlers
 
 (7 syl) a related image
rising over yellow trees
 
 (5 syllables) ties 2 images
together in an unexpected way
sudden sound - red splash
 

 The Physics of Nature
by Brandon Ludahl

Taking in the light.
Breaking it into pieces.
A rainbow appears.


Loch Maree. "Rainbows." The Rainbow Page. 20 Mar. 2001 <http://members.tripod.com/~grobius/rainbow.htm>.

 The Flower
by Matt Luft

Sky begins to clear
Opens to reveal the sun
A flower blooms bright

15. PARODY

A parody is a comic or exaggerated imitation of a work of art, creating a tone of humor in poems. A parody is most effective when both the writer and reader are familiar with the original work. A parody uses key words, phrases, structures, rhymes, themes or meter from the original, allowing you to suggest the original without directly copying it.

 Famous version Parody

 THE ROAD NOT TAKEN

Two roads diverged in a yellow wood,
And sorry I could not travel both
And be one traveler, long I stood
And looked down one as far as I could
To where it bent in the undergrowth;

Then took the other, as just as fair,
And having perhaps the better claim,
Because it was grassy and wanted wear;
Though as for that, the passing there
Had worn them really about the same.

And both that morning equally lay
In leaves no step had trodden black.
Oh, I kept the first for another day!
Yet knowing how way leads on to way,
I doubted if I should ever come back.

I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I--
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference.

Robert Frost, 1874-1963

 THE METRO NOT TAKEN

Two roads converged at the yellow sign
And sorry I do not the Metro know
And be a punctual traveler, there I stood
And looked down the street as far as I could
To see the number 26
disappear in the undergrowth.

So I waited for the other just as fair
And having perhaps the better route
Since it went to 84th
And I was wanted there at 7:00.

I am telling this with a sigh,
Miles and miles of walking since,
I waited for the one that didn't come by
And that made a lot of difference

Al Bandstra

 

 

 

 

 


Song Lyrics ~ Examples of Parodies ~ Yesterday

 

SPECIAL NOTE for 2003:
For the purposes of our practice, put a couplet, triplet and quatrain together
with a single title, image and subject. The examples given are correct examples of the requirements of the specific poems, but not of the 2003 assignment.

 16. COUPLET

COUPLETS

A couplet is a verse composed of two lines which may or may not rhyme. For our purposes we are writing couplets that rhyme. Both lines should also have the same number of syllables.

Example by Brandi Roe


My brother Bob can really bake
I love the way he makes a cake


 17. TRIPLET

A triplet, though not as common as the couplet (two-liner) or the quatrain (four-liner), nevertheless, can be an exciting, creative writing experience. The triplet can be either rhymed or unrhymed. For our purposes, we are writing triplets that rhyme. There are a variety of rhyming patterns that you can use. aaa, aba, abb. Each line should also have the same number of syllables.

Example by Andrea McDonough


Let's go to the mall
But first let us call
And ask Mrs. Hall

 18. QUATRAIN

A quatrain is a poem written in four lines. It may be rhymed or unrhymed, but for our purposes it will be rhymed only. When it rhymes, it may have a variety of rhyming patterns: aaaa, abab, aabb.

Each of the four lines should rhyme, using one of the patterns, and have the same number of syllables.

 Example by Bryce Gardner

He hit the ball so very high
It came back down out of the sky
The runner ran around the base
He ran so fast he fell on his face

 

 

 

 19. SONNET

A sonnet has 14 lines of 10 syllables each. It is usually written in iambic pentameter. There are 2 parts to a sonnet, 3 quatrains and one ending couplet.

The subject of a sonnet explores something of particular interest to the poet. Shakespeare Example


I'M NOT A BABY ANYMORE
by G.B.Lipson
 Lines Content Rhyming
Pattern
 1  It was silent on our street-late at night  a
 2  My folks in nightclothes hovered at the door  b
 3  This was the reason for another fight  a
 4  I knew by heart the pain that was in store.  b
     
 1  Now once again they said, "You didn't call!"  c
 2  We argued while my father paced the room  d
 3  I told them I forgot-that says it all!
 4  For them it was the painful voice of gloom.  d
     
 1  You could be hurt-you gave us quite a scare!"  e
 2  I never meant to give them so much grief  f
 3  These endless battles fill me with despair  e
 4  I've heard it all before-I need relief  f
     
 1  They say when I am grown that I will see.  g
 2  I know for sure we never will agree!  g

 

 

20. Free Verse and other sorts of home-made, original poetry

beware : do not read this poem

  

tonite, thriller was
abt an ol woman, so vain she
surrounded herself w /
many mirrors

it got so bad that finally she
locked herself indoors & her
whole life became the
mirrors

one day the villagers broke
into her house , but she was too
swift for them . she disappeared
into a mirror
each tenant who bought the house
after that , lost a loved one to

the ol woman in the mirror :
first a little girl
then a young woman
then the young woman/s husband

the hunger of this poem is legendary
it has taken in many victims
back off from this poem
it has drawn in yr feet
back off from this poem
it has drawn in yr legs

 

back off from this poem
it is a greedy mirror
you are into this poem . from
the waist down
nobody can hear you can they ?
this poem has had you up to here
belch
this poem aint got no manners
you cant call out frm this poem
relax now & go w / this poem

move & roll on to this poem
do not resist this poem
this poem has yr eyes
this poem has his head
this poem has his arms
this poem has his fingers
this poem has his fingertips

this poem is the reader & the
reader this poem

statistic : the us bureau of missing persons re-
ports that in 1968 over 100,000 people
disappeared leaving no solid clues
nor trace only
a space in the lives of their friends

by Ishmael Reed

More Examples

21. I Am poem with examples of adaptations

FIRST STANZA
I am (two special characteristics you have)
I wonder (something you are actually curious about)
I hear (an imaginary sound)
I see (an imaginary sight)
I want (an actual desire)
I am (the first line of the poem repeated)

SECOND STANZA
I pretend (something you actually pretend to do)
I feel (a feeling about something imaginary)
I touch (an imaginary touch)
I worry (something that really bothers you)
I cry (something that makes you very sad)
I am (the first line of the poem repeated)

THIRD STANZA
I understand (something you know is true)
I say (something you believe in)
I dream (something you actually dream about)
I try (something you really make an effort about)
I hope (something you actually hope for)
I am (the first line of the poem repeated

 


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