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| Events | Events are not all there, out of order, vague and confusing | Most events are present. Events to substantiate ideas are not all there and lack detail. | A message is substantiated with all of the major events written matter-of-factly | The message is clear and supported in detail with all 20 major well described events. | ||
| Message Substantiation | Weak connection | Can be inferred, but not explicitly stated | Explicitly related to in body of book | Message is woven throughout the book and proved to be true | ||
| Organization | *Event sequence confuses reader *Indentations for paragraphs are not used. |
*Few events out of sequence *Some paragraph definition problems |
*Events sequence is accurate *Paragraphs well indicated |
*Foreshadowing hints create suspense *Story moves on with suspense and excitement |
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| Voice and Word Choice | Word choice is boring and bland | Some interesting and precise choice of words | Precise and matter-of-fact vocabulary | Rich, colorful, precise language moves and excites the reader. Lots of adjectives, adverbs and voc. words! | ||
| Fluency and Conventions | Reading is hard to understand and awkward | Sentences are at times fluent and easy to understand/several convention errors | Sentences are simple, fluent and easy to understand, few conv. errors | Sentences vary in length and style and are fluent and easy to understand | ||
*No image necessary |
. | Inaccurate, incomplete or not in own words | In own words | Enhances entire book and well written | ||
| Images | Do not always match page and/or not all pages have images | *Most images are present & match page *Minor errors in pr & bib | An image on every page, correctly pr'd and bib'd | Great image choices, presentation enhancespage |